Describing Sadhguru to a Room Full of Women Entrepreneurs – Feedback Needed

So I recently started doing a course on communication and as an exercise, was asked to describe Sadhguru to a room full of women entrepreneurs:

When I think of women entrepreneurs, the three words that come to my mind are – powerful, resilient and leaders and interestingly enough, these words can also be used to describe Sadhguru.

Sadhguru is a yogi who has empowered millions of people through his simple yet powerful yogic practices. He is a resilient leader who has withstood many a storm, all the while driving people to focus on their well being and improve their lives. His focus hasn’t just been on turning people inwards but also outwards to the environment and the social conditions around them. To this end, he has spearheaded several initiatives and campaigns which have found resonance amongst youth, farmers, tribals and celebs alike. As a leader, he will never tell you what you must do, rather empower you with the right tools so that you are able to do whatever is needed to the best of your abilities.

This is what I came up with. What do you think about it? Can I improve this piece in any way? Let me know!

Submitted August 24, 2025 at 10:25AM by punkport https://ift.tt/A273Gfo